On the moon
When I went on the moon
I felt so nervous falling... boom!
I bounced on teeny weeny rocks
And made big ginormous hops!
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Kia ora Dasha,
ReplyDeleteGreat work on completing another Summer Learning Journey activity - keep up the good work. Don’t forget to comment back to blog commenters as well as on others SLJ blog posts to gain extra points.
What a wonderful poem you have created and I like that you have included an image in your post to help it stand out.
Going to the moon would be amazing. Imagine trying to walk with no gravity to keep you on the ground, how do you think that would feel?
Until next time, happy blogging :)
Emma
I think it will feel like I am standing on sand.
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