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Tuesday, July 20, 2021

Creepy forest of Spooky things

CHAPTER ONE. ELISE'S WALK IN THE WOODS.

One day, a little girl named Elise, wanted to go for a walk by herself in the woods very much. One day she asked her parents about that, but of course her parents said "no". Elise went to her bedroom and started thinking.

"Why do I always have to go through the woods with someone? I am a big girl. I don't need to hold my mum's and dad's hand with attaching to them like a magnet. I need to run away from home and walk through the woods and then go back home."

So Elise ran out of the door and when she opened the door the mum shouted to her: "Elise! Don't go into the woods. You will get lost!" But it was too late. 

Little Elise ran and ran into the deep, dark woods and for real, she got lost in the woods.

CHAPTER TWO. THE FOREST.

The forest was the creepiest she had ever  seen. There were swamps all around her. The trees were leaning on her. There were yellow eyes, that looked at Elise! The moon was green and there was no light to be seen. The owls were hooting on the trees and it was so spooky, that Elise started to cry!

Then suddenly, Elise saw a flashing rainbow lights coming from somewhere.

CHAPTER THREE. THE RAINBOW JELLYFISH.

Elise looked up and saw a tiny green jellyfish glowing in the dark, spooky night. It was making the sound that whale makes in the sea. It was swimming in the air! It was magic. 

Elise slowly walked to the jellyfish.  She wanted to touch it, but when she was nearly there, the glowing creature disappeared! After a second, there appeared another jellyfish a bit further than the one before. 

Suddenly, there appeared some more jellies! But they were all of different colours. "I think they are telling me the way home", thought Elise. So she followed them by trying to touch them.

When she reached the last jelly, she saw something very very old, but it wasn't her house!

CHAPTER FOUR. THE GREENHOUSE.

It was an old greenhouse made out of wood. The green paint was peeling off the house. 

Near the doorway, there stood a metal barrel that flies and a broomstick next to it. Elise wanted to get the broomstick but it flew right into the house! 

Elise ran after it and when she went inside the old house, she was terrified.

CHAPTER FIVE. THE FOREST OF BROCCOOLI TREES.

Elise heard a screech sound behind her. When she turned around, she saw a door hiding the stairs that led to the basement. Elise went down the stairs and she saw a forest of broccoli trees!

At that very moment she saw a bird sitting next to her. "Hi little bird," said Elise. But the bird roared and showed its sharp teeth and flew away. Elise was scared as she understood that she had found herself in an enchanted forest.

CHAPTER SIX. THE HOUSE ON CHICKEN LEGS.

In the heart of the enchanted forest, there stood a house on chicken legs. The front of the house was facing the woods and the back was facing Elise. Elise walked to the house and said:

"Chicken house, chicken house. Turn front to me and back to the woods!"

Obeyed the chicken and house turned to her. While it was turning it was clucking like a chicken.

Someone old lived in the house on chicken legs.

CHAPTER SEVEN. THE OLD WOMEN.

The person who lived in the chicken legged house was an old woman herself.

She had green skin, white long  hair, long nose, a horny dress and wooden shoes. Oh, and I nearly forgot! She also had one eye!

Elise was very very scared.

"Hello little child", said the old woman, "come into my house. It is cold out here, but it is warm in my home".

"Y-y-yes, of c-c-course," said Elise frightendly.

When Elise stepped forward, she took a deep breathe and tiptoed into the chicken legged house.

The old woman's house was even scarier than the old woman.

CHAPTER EIGHT. ROTTEN BANANAS 

The old woman brought Elise to the living room and the two of them sat near by the fire.

"You can give me something to eat because I didn't eat anything except for mushrooms," said the old woman holding up a fly-agaric.

"I have a rotten banana," said Elise pulling out a rotten banana out of her tiny bag.

The woman snatched snatched the rotten banana from Elise's hands. When the woman swallowed it, she laughed.

"Oh, that is the yummiest, gummiest, and tummiest food I tried," laughed the old woman and stood up.

She told Elise to follow her and so the curious girl did.

CHAPTER NINE. TIME FOR DINNER.

Both of them came to a room with a heating stove and a big flat long wooden spoon.

The old woman stopped and said: "Let's play a game." "But how is the game called?" asked Elise. "It is called "Hot crossed buns"," said the woman firing the heating stove. "How do we play "Hot crossed buns"?" wondered Elise bouncing on her bottom towards the woman and landing on the end of the wooden spoon. "The bun sits on the spoon," says the old woman grabbing the spoon with Elise on it and is slowly dragged the heating stove. "Wow!" exclaimed Elise in astonishment. "And then the bun goes into the oven," continued the woman and quickly slid the spoon into the heating stove! But when the woman slid the spoon out, Elise was still holding on tight to it! "What's next?" asked Elise. "And then...you...need to close the heating stove and wait for five minutes till the bun is ready," said the woman. "Ok, now let go off the spoon and curl up as a bun." "But I don't know how to curl up as a bun," said Elise. "How, how! Oh my god, when can I eat today?" shouted the woman picking up Elise. She made her hold the spoon, stood on it herself and showed an example how to sit on it changing places with Elise. "I am showing you! You  need to curl up like this and...," but when the woman just curled up, Elise slid the whole spoon into the heating stove!

"Ah," shouted the woman in the heating stove. "Help! Help!" But no one could help her and Elise rushed out of the witch's house and disappeared in the deep enchanted forest.

CHAPTER TEN. THE PORCELAIN DOLL.

Elise was running through the enchanted forest and soon heard a strange noice."Crash! Smash! Crack!"

After she had taken three steps forward, she saw big green eyes glowing in the darkness. First Elise thought it was a wolf and then, only then, she thought it was a monster!

"Aaaah," screamed Elise.

"Don't be scared!" someone said.

Then the eyes went into the light.

"Hi," greeted the girl, who came out into the light.

"What happened?" asked Elise.

"It was a peaceful evening. Suddenly the bad goblin sent his slitherdogs to our village and they destroyed our village of glass and I was the only one who survived! If you break the goblin's wand, the spell will be broken and it will be the end of the bad goblin," explained the doll.

"Ok, then let's go," suggested Elise.

So they both walked to the bad goblin's house.

CHAPTER ELEVEN. THE MAGIC CODE.

Finally Elise and the doll came to the goblin's house. It was a foggy forest of darkness.

"The fog will not let you in if you don't guess the code and the question is there," said the doll.

Elise read the question and this is what it said:

This creature is green and it can jump high.

It can jump so high that it can touch the sky.

"Is it a frog,"said Elise.

"Yes", said the fog and appeared a black path that led to the goblin's house.

CHAPTER TWELVE. THE RAT FOREST.

Both of them went through the fog and saw rats squeaking and sitting on trees. The rats were eating leaves.

"Don't rats eat nuts and cheese?" asked Elise. "No," replied the doll. 

"Have you ever bet one?" asked Elise again. "How can a little glass doll bet a scary hairy rat?!" shouted the doll. The doll's face was turning red from anger.

"Okay fine," said Elise.

Finally they came to the goblin's black castle.

CHAPTER THIRTEEN. THE SCARY BLACK CASTLE.

When they saw the castle, they were terrified. There were ghosts floating in the air and looking at Elise and the doll. Vampires were hunging on the roof upside down with black bats.

"BATS", shouted the doll frightendly. "Calm down! Bats are just flying mice", said Elise. 

"AWOOOOOOO", said a strange sound. 

"Did you hear that?" whispered the doll asking Elise. "Yep", said Elise. "AWOOOOO", that sound came out again.  "Werewolf," shouted the doll. 

Then they both ran away to the castle.

CHAPTER FOURTEEN. THE FLYING MONKEY CALLED BANANA.

The two of them ran to the goblin's castle of evilness. Suddenly they heard a flapping of wings.

"A flying pig!" shouted the doll. "Oh my god, can you stop being such a scaredy-cat?" asked Elise. 

Then they heard something in the bushes.

"Hide me," suggested Elise. The doll joked: "Ok. Here is another scaredy-cat!"

Then something came out of the bushes and it was a flying monkey.

"Hi everyone. My name is Banana", said the flying monkey. "Hello," greeted the doll and Elise at the same time. "I know you, Elise. You are trying to break the goblin's wand to save the forest from the evil bad goblin!" said the monkey.

"That's right! Let's go to the goblin's castle with us," proposed Elise  "Okay," agreed the flying monkey and the whole group walked to the goblin's castle.

CHAPTER FIFTEEN. UNITE THE UNICORN.

While they were walking, they heard a sound from the bushes. 

Suddenly Elise saw a piece of white hair sticking out of the bush.

Elise pulled it and it said: "Hey, who's that pulling my tail and plus it's me, Unite the Unicorn.

"It's me, Elise," said Elise. 

Then the unicorn poked himself out and said: "Oh, I know you. You are going to the goblin's castle to break his wand."

"Yeah, do you want to come with us?" asked the doll.

Unite nodded and went with them to the goblin's castle.

CHAPTER SIXTEEN. BANANA'S LIFE AND UNITE'S LIFE.

When they were walking to the bad goblin's castle, Banana and Unite were telling their stories about their lives.

"I used to live in a monkey land up high in the sky. When I was 3 I fell down from the sky and I landed into an eagle's nest and the eagles treated me as a child and they taught me how to fly. And that is how I got brown feathery wings," said Banana.

"That is so cool," said Elise.

"I used to live in the sky too," started Unite. "When I was just born, my parents thought I was too stupid to live with them because I didn't look like them, so they just kicked me out. That's how I started to live on the ground not in the sky or clouds,"said Unite.

"That is so sad, Unite," frowned Elise.

In this sad mood they continued their journey to the goblin's house.

CHAPTER SEVENTEEN. ROTTEN TOMATOES. 

"Oh, I am so hungry," said Unite.

"I have some rotten tomatoes," said Elise, "Do you want one?"

"Nooooo thanks. I'm full," said Unite.

"I want it," said Banana. But when he tried it, he said: " Yak! Oh, I mean, yummy tomatoes, Elise. I don't want it anymore. You can have it, dolly."

"I don't want it and plus, don't call me dolly," cried the doll. "Ok," said Banana.

Soon they continued their long way.

3 comments:

  1. Dasha, This story you started writing is very suspenseful! You had me guessing what was going to happen next! I would've liked to have read more.
    I think there could be another chapter?
    Keep it up Dasha!

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  2. Hi Dasha

    I like the setting you have chosen. You have set the scene really well and described the problem in you narrative. What parts of the story you have written are you pleased with and what would you go back and improve on?

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  3. Hello Miss Bunting
    The part I am pleased with is that I put adjectives and verbs I use to make it interesting.
    The part I'm going to improve on, is to use more strong words in it.
    I didn't finish the story yet, but I just need more days and weeks to finish it.
    Good bye!
    Dasha

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