I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wednesday, August 25, 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post!
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Hi Dasha, I like how you used a theme for your lockdown poetry, 'birds'.
ReplyDeletePlease go back and check your haiku poem has;
Line 1: 5 syllables
Line 2: 7 syllables
Line 3: 5 syllables
Your tongue twister had my tongue in a knot. :)
Hi Miss Ferguson
DeleteSorry, I can't correct the Haiku poem here because I would need to re-post the whole blog. But this is what I would write:
Birds tweet in the sun.
Birds sing in the bright morning.
Birds are colorful.