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Wednesday, September 1, 2021

NARRATIVE WRITING "Crazy animals"

Hi bloggers 
I have done some narrative writing.
I chose these pictures because they are very funny.
Read my story and look at the pictures.

Crazy animals

Emergency, Emergency! There are four animals that need to get free! A giraffe is stuck on the tree, a turtle is turned upside down, a dog is stuck in the sits of the plane and a horse is stuck near by a tree! Please, save these creatures, even if they are stupid! 
One day two heroes knew about that and set off to Africa. There they found the giraffe and called the helicopter. It grabbed the giraffe and put it on the ground. 
 Then they went off to Europe. There they saw the turtle and flipped it over. That was very easy. 
After that, they set off to Russia. There they found the plane with the dog sitting in it. They pushed the sit in front and pulled the dog out. 
Lastly, they went to China. They saw the horse and tied it to a rope. Then they pulled it away from the tree. 
At the end they saw a pizza man walking to them. "Hey, why did you two cappuccinos saved those animals?" When the two friends knew that this pizza man had damaged the animals' lives! So they ate him up! THE END!






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6 comments:

  1. Fiona LunanSeptember 2, 2021 at 10:32 AM

    Hi Dasha- your story is also very funny. Where did you get the idea about capuccinos? That was a surprise ending! I would like to know exactly how or why the giraffe got into the tree. Maybe you could add that to the story.It was certainly a worldwide adventure!

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    1. Dasha ShirinskaiaSeptember 2, 2021 at 5:43 PM

      Hi Miss Lunan,
      I got the word capuccinos from my batman story that I made up. I wrote 2 stories. My first story was Karry and Leo. My second story was Batman. My third story was this story and I am still writting my fourth story - the creepy forest with spooky thing. The giraffe decided to climd the tree because it couldn't reach the leaves.
      Dasha

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  2. Mrs TabakSeptember 2, 2021 at 10:59 AM

    Hi Dasha
    I love your story, you have a great imagination. It take it these animals were actually alright? You kept me reading and I really enjoyed it. Keep up the great work Dasha.
    Mrs T

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    1. Dasha ShirinskaiaSeptember 2, 2021 at 5:52 PM

      Hi Mrs T,
      Actually the animals were not alright because they were in that not comfortable position for a long time.
      Dasha

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  3. MichelleSeptember 2, 2021 at 12:17 PM

    Hi Dasha, Great story you made me laugh out loud. I love that you have put all the pictures together in one story, great idea. I am looking forward to looking at all your other blogs, you are amazing!! Michelle

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 2, 2021 at 6:05 PM

    Hi Michelle,
    Thank you. I am going to blog more stories very soon! I know you will like them very much.
    Dasha

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